I liked how you put evidence in to show how he did it. How many times did you have to record the Imovie? I liked how you put in that he was a slave and wanted to be free.
I like your pictures. Why did you choose determined as your thesis? I like how you told when you were giving evidence and I like how you explained why Henry was getting in the box.
I liked your evidence because you explained it . Is this your all time favorite book ? I would suggest the theme is persistence because he used 1 strategy but it didn't work so he tried again !
I like the way you described how he was determined and got real pictures.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you described how he was determined and got real pictures.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you put evidence in to show how he did it. How many times did you have to record the Imovie? I liked how you put in that he was a slave and wanted to be free.
ReplyDeleteI like your pictures. Why did you choose determined as your thesis? I like how you told when you were giving evidence and I like how you explained why Henry was getting in the box.
ReplyDeleteI liked your evidence because you explained it . Is this your all time favorite book ? I would suggest the theme is persistence because he used 1 strategy but it didn't work so he tried again !
ReplyDeleteI liked your evidence. I like how you made the pictures real. Why did you pick determination as your theme?
ReplyDeleteNice job Aiden.l I like how you showed your evidence and this nshows that.
ReplyDeleteNice job Aiden I like how you showed your evidence and this shows that.
ReplyDeleteWhy did you pick determination as your theme for your book?
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