Friday, December 18, 2015

Beyond the Cover- By: Ariel G-T.

Running Shoes Literary Essay
Author:  Ariel G-T.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2Qh3GlBziLedHpHV3B4ODl3Nkk/view?usp=sharing

7 comments:

  1. I like that you had a loud voice.
    Why did you choose those pictures?
    Next time you mite want to give a little more evidence.

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  2. I liked your evidence.
    Why did you chose running shoes?
    Next time don't yell so much into the ipad.

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  3. I like the words you used. Do you have a dream? Next time cut it when you are done talking.

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  4. Nice job Ariel you did really great I like your photo's to.

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  5. Nice job Ariel you did really good Cool photo's to.

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  6. I liked how your voice was loud and clear.How many times have you read this book?I liked your pictures.

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  7. I liked your pictures. Do you want to write a book about dreams ? Next time you might want to stop it when you are done :) !

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