Wednesday, December 16, 2015

Beyond the Cover- Mike A.

A Fine Dessert  Literary Essay
Author:   Mike A.


8 comments:

  1. I like your evidence.
    If you had to pick another book what would it be?
    I like the interdiction.

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  2. I like your pictures.Have you ever helped your mom and dad cook?I like how you explained what changed.:}

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  3. Wow! Sounds like a great book! I love to cook and will read it!

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  4. Wow! I love to cook! This sounds like a book I'd love to read! I love they way you explained how it changed throughout the book.

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  5. I liked the pictures!
    Did you find a pattern I did?
    Could you have spoke a little louder?

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  6. I liked the evidence!
    Have you ever helped someone make a dessert?
    Maybe you could have did more evidence?

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  7. I like the pictures. Have you made a dessert before? Next time be louder.

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  8. I like the pictures their really good. When have you ever cooked with your mom or dad. Maybe make the pictures a little bit longer.

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